Comment from
patcelaw
This is a very powerful and poignant message that you represented in this lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. It would've helped me a bit. Had you had your text darker on the green or had the background a little lighter with the text that you chose.
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
Sorry, perhaps I should go change that. I do appreciate your reading it and taking the time to comment.
Comment from
Wojciech Gurak
Pretty good observations about love in this poem. The last stanza expressed a great wish for everyone. If it were to happen, life would be so much easier.
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
Yes, I agree. If it were to happen it would be easier for everyone. I thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem