2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Put Your Hands On Me"*
6 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a very stirring poem. I loved the reference to guiding the blind man across the body. Very sensual and alluring. Like touching your lover for the first time. Beautifully written and deeply sensual. Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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This was a very stirring poem. I loved the reference to guiding the blind man across the body. Very sensual and alluring. Like touching your lover for the first time. Beautifully written and deeply sensual. Gretchen
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
i'd rather be deaf than blind...
being blind scares me for some reason
maybe i was blind in a past life...
anyway, a great lover tanka and its response
nice imagery and smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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i'd rather be deaf than blind...
being blind scares me for some reason
maybe i was blind in a past life...
anyway, a great lover tanka and its response
nice imagery and smooth flow throughout
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is very sensual, and it flows as smoothly has those hands being guided down the body. That's real talent. Thank you for sharing this God given talent with us.
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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This poem is very sensual, and it flows as smoothly has those hands being guided down the body. That's real talent. Thank you for sharing this God given talent with us.
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
What a lovely piece of beautiful and poetic music this poem seems to have.
I love the artistry and presentation and the poem. As you dazzle me with another, I am in awe of your deep and lovely way with words.
I tried to read a piece last night but it said it was taken down. I hope all was ok.
Thanks again for this great piece of genius. Lotsa love and hugs. Debi
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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What a lovely piece of beautiful and poetic music this poem seems to have.
I love the artistry and presentation and the poem. As you dazzle me with another, I am in awe of your deep and lovely way with words.
I tried to read a piece last night but it said it was taken down. I hope all was ok.
Thanks again for this great piece of genius. Lotsa love and hugs. Debi
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Debi.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a well written and expressed Tanja poem. Itbis passionate and sensual. It flows very well in terms of the emotions that the wirds bring to mind and h eart.
Great poem.
RJ
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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This is a well written and expressed Tanja poem. Itbis passionate and sensual. It flows very well in terms of the emotions that the wirds bring to mind and h eart.
Great poem.
RJ
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you very much, rj
Gypsy hugs
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You?re welcome
Comment from royowen
What an invitation to participate in, a wonderful written work, most provocative in intent, quite deliberate and sensuous in it's goals, I don't think anyone writes these as well as you Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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What an invitation to participate in, a wonderful written work, most provocative in intent, quite deliberate and sensuous in it's goals, I don't think anyone writes these as well as you Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure
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My pleasure
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My pleasure