2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Last Night".
9 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
Excellent write. Emotional pain has a sneaky way of surfacing in dreams even though we think we've dealt with it.
As I age and, hopefully, mature I can honestly say that forgiveness of ourselves and those who have hurt us is the path to inner peace.
Enjoyed the write and presentation, Gypsy
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
  |
Excellent write. Emotional pain has a sneaky way of surfacing in dreams even though we think we've dealt with it.
As I age and, hopefully, mature I can honestly say that forgiveness of ourselves and those who have hurt us is the path to inner peace.
Enjoyed the write and presentation, Gypsy
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
-
Thank you very much, Julia (*-*)
gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and so many don't learn their lesson and go straight into another toxic relationship, the seem to be attracted to the exact type of person
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
|
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and so many don't learn their lesson and go straight into another toxic relationship, the seem to be attracted to the exact type of person
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
-
Yes, that's true. Many are attracted to the norm no matter how bad it is.
Thank you very much, Mike
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
To think of someone else putting with a dishonest person maybe some sort of sweet relief, I really like your first stanza as it sets up the rest, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
|
To think of someone else putting with a dishonest person maybe some sort of sweet relief, I really like your first stanza as it sets up the rest, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
-
Thank you very much, kym
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Out of sixes early this week but this is very well written with emotion that is relatable. My ex husband cheated but he got cheated on after by the one he cheated with. So let's be glad those kinds just show up in bad dreams. You have an excellent poem and presentation here!!
Love Alexan :)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
|
Out of sixes early this week but this is very well written with emotion that is relatable. My ex husband cheated but he got cheated on after by the one he cheated with. So let's be glad those kinds just show up in bad dreams. You have an excellent poem and presentation here!!
Love Alexan :)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
-
Thank you very much, Alexan
Love,
Gypsy
-
You're welcome, Gypsy Hugsx
Comment from shelley kaye
oooh deep free verse
and the six lines worked well and flowed smoothly
love the "dark dream" line...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
....................................
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
|
oooh deep free verse
and the six lines worked well and flowed smoothly
love the "dark dream" line...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
....................................
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
-
Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I honestly believe if a man or woman cheats once they will do it again and again. One doesn't change their stripes. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation. You're very talented.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
|
I honestly believe if a man or woman cheats once they will do it again and again. One doesn't change their stripes. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation. You're very talented.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
-
Thank you very much,
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's so sad and those hurtful memories can still resurge in our dreams as they lie in our subconscious thoughts. You're right that cheaters never change and will continue to hurt others.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
|
That's so sad and those hurtful memories can still resurge in our dreams as they lie in our subconscious thoughts. You're right that cheaters never change and will continue to hurt others.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
-
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Marival
Comment from GWHARGIS
Thank goodness for the two timers, the smooches, the ones who let us down. For if they didn't we wouldn't know we deserved better. We would just accept it as it is. That's no good for anyone. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
|
Thank goodness for the two timers, the smooches, the ones who let us down. For if they didn't we wouldn't know we deserved better. We would just accept it as it is. That's no good for anyone. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
-
Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
I guess we live and sometimes we learn from our experiences. Well expressed and formatted. The silhouettes are the perfect way to emphasize something that is secretive or deceptive, cause it expresses darkness.
Nice job.
RJ
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
|
I guess we live and sometimes we learn from our experiences. Well expressed and formatted. The silhouettes are the perfect way to emphasize something that is secretive or deceptive, cause it expresses darkness.
Nice job.
RJ
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
-
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy hugs
-
You?re welcome