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A poem exploring the emotional landscape of loss and longing
3 total reviews
Comment from
kahpot
The pain of loss can be so very hard to bear, you have penned this feeling
(though sad) very beautifully, from blue to dark, a terrible change, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 04-May-2024
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
The pain of losing someone does indeed darken our world for a while until we let ourselves see and feel the sun again, I could identify with your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a powerful poem. Your words convey a sense of loss and longing. You do a wonderful job of painting a picture of the emotional turmoil that accompanies the end of a relationship. The imagery of the rising and setting sun was great. I saw that as a metaphor for the passage of time and the cycle of grief. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
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