My Fault, I'm A Mess!
a day in the life...4 total reviews
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a very cute concept for your poem and the artwork was well selected. My only suggestion is that you might want to work on the flow. Try reading it aloud to yourself, and you should be able to see what I mean.
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This was a very cute concept for your poem and the artwork was well selected. My only suggestion is that you might want to work on the flow. Try reading it aloud to yourself, and you should be able to see what I mean.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
Comment from hullabaloo22
Very good poem. I enjoyed reading this, the humor was nicely done. I especially liked the bit about the sneeze. The ending was so sweet too, it's nice to have someone who overlooks all the little imperfections.
Good luck.
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Very good poem. I enjoyed reading this, the humor was nicely done. I especially liked the bit about the sneeze. The ending was so sweet too, it's nice to have someone who overlooks all the little imperfections.
Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You described an awful mess here in your rhyming poem and a good tidy up could save the day if only we put our mind to it! A good entry for the contest, love Dolly x
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You described an awful mess here in your rhyming poem and a good tidy up could save the day if only we put our mind to it! A good entry for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
Comment from RFL
I love your poem. It's so REAL and CLEVER! Making and sustaining a mess is easy, but writing a poem about is challenging. YOu met the challenge. I wish you success in the contest.
Best, RFL
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I love your poem. It's so REAL and CLEVER! Making and sustaining a mess is easy, but writing a poem about is challenging. YOu met the challenge. I wish you success in the contest.
Best, RFL
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
