2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Tempestuous Storm"*
7 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
Sometimes we see a relationship that never has a quiet moment, but rather one storm after another. Interestingly enough, neither person wants a quiet moment. The storms give them energy.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Sometimes we see a relationship that never has a quiet moment, but rather one storm after another. Interestingly enough, neither person wants a quiet moment. The storms give them energy.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I had to smile at this. In the US we still have a few wild horses left. Not at many as we should. The image of a mare striving to catch the interest of a stallion caused me to smile. Of course, these are probably metaphors for humans, but I stayed with the horses. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I had to smile at this. In the US we still have a few wild horses left. Not at many as we should. The image of a mare striving to catch the interest of a stallion caused me to smile. Of course, these are probably metaphors for humans, but I stayed with the horses. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from lyenochka
I guess both the horses and the wind are free to run. I like the personification of the storm which is choosing which wild horse to ride. The wild horses are untamable like the wind.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I guess both the horses and the wind are free to run. I like the personification of the storm which is choosing which wild horse to ride. The wild horses are untamable like the wind.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful presentation of words and firm. The words are very passionate and created a response that is anything but vapid.
Have a great night.
Nicely done.
RJ
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Beautiful presentation of words and firm. The words are very passionate and created a response that is anything but vapid.
Have a great night.
Nicely done.
RJ
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
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Comment from shelley kaye
horsey!!
cool wild tanka
trotting free
with good imagery
and a smooth canter ;-)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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horsey!!
cool wild tanka
trotting free
with good imagery
and a smooth canter ;-)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
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Comment from Julie Helms
What a gorgeous horse you have chosen to top your poem. Wild and unbridled free spirits, just like the powerful wind you compare it to. This is a really lovely tanka. Somehow reaching into the depths of the reader's soul and creating a yearning and longing.
Julie
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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What a gorgeous horse you have chosen to top your poem. Wild and unbridled free spirits, just like the powerful wind you compare it to. This is a really lovely tanka. Somehow reaching into the depths of the reader's soul and creating a yearning and longing.
Julie
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Julie
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Comment from royowen
There is something about a wild herd of horses racing with the powerful abandon of those magnificent beasts unbridled like the wind that destroys life and property, and the wind that brings rain and life. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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There is something about a wild herd of horses racing with the powerful abandon of those magnificent beasts unbridled like the wind that destroys life and property, and the wind that brings rain and life. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
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