Pain in Poetry
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Comment from FurryBunny
"Circumference as Eaters Axis" is a dark and abstract poem with vivid imagery that creates a haunting atmosphere. The repetition adds tension, but the lack of structure may be challenging for some readers. Overall, it effectively immerses readers in a world of darkness, but its unconventional style may not appeal to everyone.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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"Circumference as Eaters Axis" is a dark and abstract poem with vivid imagery that creates a haunting atmosphere. The repetition adds tension, but the lack of structure may be challenging for some readers. Overall, it effectively immerses readers in a world of darkness, but its unconventional style may not appeal to everyone.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thanks for your comment and review.
My next pice if your interested is Entitled,
"Cancerous Cravings"
Doctor Ricky
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing. As I read, I always wonder exactly what's going through your mind. LOL I enjoyed guessing.
As pain demon strates the risings? (states??)
And,as they emerge from their past Purge (And as)
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for sharing. As I read, I always wonder exactly what's going through your mind. LOL I enjoyed guessing.
As pain demon strates the risings? (states??)
And,as they emerge from their past Purge (And as)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Demon= Pain and suffering .
Strates= Not a word
(Demonstrates)
Rhymes better than states.