Comment from
shelley kaye
a faithful acrostic with smooth rhyme and flow throughout the lines
nice imagery with deep feelings
one suggestion i have is maybe try a black background and a yellowish font to blend with the pic? just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest - it should do well.
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
Thank you, Shelley. You are so right! You really know your color combinations. I took your advice and it improved the overall poem remarkably. Than you so much for taking the time to review my work and give such constructive comments.
reply by shelley kaye on 16-Apr-2024
Comment from
Marilyn Hamilton
A very nice Acrostic poem for the writing prompt. The criteria was met by having the word FAITHFUL down the left side of the poem. The poem is written in good shape using the acrostic word. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
Thank you, Marilyn. I appreciate your kind review and good luck wish.