Seasons In Time
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Spring's Stolen my Heart "Poems about the different seasons.
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A lovely ode to Spring after a rough, cold winter. An original way to descibe seasons as relationships you are involved in. The artwork is lovely but did you realize it is a dipiction of a Fall day and not a Spring day? Perhaps artwork containing Spring flowers would add to the poem more. Just a suggestion. The artwork is optional. The poem on its own is lovely. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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A lovely ode to Spring after a rough, cold winter. An original way to descibe seasons as relationships you are involved in. The artwork is lovely but did you realize it is a dipiction of a Fall day and not a Spring day? Perhaps artwork containing Spring flowers would add to the poem more. Just a suggestion. The artwork is optional. The poem on its own is lovely. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I went by the title which is called" a different spring", however I will go back in and take another look at the artistic choices. Thank you for reviewing and commenting.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very beautifully worded poem about spring and it capturing your heart. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful week and a beautiful day. You might want to darken the background with the light letters that you got because the letters don't show up too well. Patric.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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This is a very beautifully worded poem about spring and it capturing your heart. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful week and a beautiful day. You might want to darken the background with the light letters that you got because the letters don't show up too well. Patric.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you. I deeply appreciate your reading of it, along with your comments. I will take your advice about the background. I sometimes forget that just because I can read it doesn't mean everyone else can.