Decisions
One must make good choices to move on successfully.2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We sometimes fall through the cracks of life and need time to re-engage and get back on track, a fine poem for the contest, I enjoyed he sentiments here, we hope to get back on track before time runs out, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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We sometimes fall through the cracks of life and need time to re-engage and get back on track, a fine poem for the contest, I enjoyed he sentiments here, we hope to get back on track before time runs out, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Luckily, this little poem isn't about me today. But it may have been true some years ago. Thanks for the read and the feedback.
Comment from GoWiSt
Interesting picture art choice.
Fulfilled the line and syllable count requirements of the naani poem/contest.
"One must make good choices to move on successfully." Geez, tell me about it; I've been suffering from a bad decision made long ago. :-(
Good metaphoric imagery with crack in time. Good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Interesting picture art choice.
Fulfilled the line and syllable count requirements of the naani poem/contest.
"One must make good choices to move on successfully." Geez, tell me about it; I've been suffering from a bad decision made long ago. :-(
Good metaphoric imagery with crack in time. Good luck!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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We all make bad decisions at times in our lives. The question is what is a person going to do when he discovers his mistake. It is always up to you to make things right for yourself, or to help someone else.
Thanks for the read and feedback,