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Mixed up Alphabet

Having fun with the alphabet

5 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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This is so cute and would be a fun children's poem. Your parents had such a fun sense of humor and I'm sure you inherited it. Congratulations on the win of this interesting contest!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    I'm so pleased you enjoyed my alphabet poem, it was fun to write.
    Thanks again NanaGaye
Comment from BermyBye50
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NanaGaye,

Welcome to Fanstory and congrats on winning the Children's Rhyming poem contest. This is a exceptional example of expertly created verse. Your rhymes are brilliant and flow smoothly when read. Looking forward to reading and reviewing more of your writes in the future.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
    Thank you Thank you Thank for your wonderful encouraging words. It just makes me want to write more All the best to you Eugene
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Exceptional
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Gaye, I did not see this poem in my pm box. I always look for you, but I had to search your stuff to see it. This is wonderful. And so deserving of the win. Congrats, dear friend for this awesome children's poem. I love it and felt like I was almost singing it as it moved so beautifully throughout. Thank you for sharing this sweet winner with us.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
    Wow I can't believe it. I had some ideas how this could be extended to a fun alphabet experience for children, I go over it with you.
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
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This is a very cute poem! I love how the letters are mixed up, almost like a mixed up acrostic. This is a perfect one for the children's poetry contest. Thanks for sharing this.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thanks so much for your comments and six star reward. I appreciate it.
Comment from Natureschild
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This is such a joy to read. The fact that it is not alphabetical makes it interesting and keeps me reading. I liked the rhyming couplets which lend a musical charm to the poem. I am sure any child would be delighted to learn the alphabet with the aid of your poem. - Terry

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Hi Terry I appreciate your encouraging comments and thanks for the six star reward Cheers NanaGaye