2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "* Time After Time *".
8 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, a poem of love and devotion. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Of special note:
where our steadfast love
is constant and unwavering
(That's commitment, and that is love.)
Well done. Perfect photo choice. Xo. M
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Hi Gypsy, a poem of love and devotion. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Of special note:
where our steadfast love
is constant and unwavering
(That's commitment, and that is love.)
Well done. Perfect photo choice. Xo. M
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Margaret
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Another beautiful read and poem, it is beyond two people finding love again many years after that lost each other, (hope that makes sense) it happened to me, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Another beautiful read and poem, it is beyond two people finding love again many years after that lost each other, (hope that makes sense) it happened to me, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Kym
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy...I loved that song, love that album, She's So Unusual. Reminds me of High School even though it came out a couple years after my graduation year, 1981
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy...I loved that song, love that album, She's So Unusual. Reminds me of High School even though it came out a couple years after my graduation year, 1981
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Happy weekend, Mike
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, when we have the true love partner, we are never separated from them. We will remain with them forever. Thank you for sharing your talent in this beautiful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Yes, when we have the true love partner, we are never separated from them. We will remain with them forever. Thank you for sharing your talent in this beautiful presentation with us.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I'm not sure about reincarnation but I honesty think we are born with some fragments of memories of our ancestors. I do think when children are young, they say things about stuff before they were born and it's factual. That's gotta come from somewhere. Great poem. Soul mates are intertwined forever. Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I'm not sure about reincarnation but I honesty think we are born with some fragments of memories of our ancestors. I do think when children are young, they say things about stuff before they were born and it's factual. That's gotta come from somewhere. Great poem. Soul mates are intertwined forever. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much
I appreciate your kind review.
I believe the spirit and soul never dies and the body just changes form.
Keeping memories inside through lives makes sense. My daughter used to cry for her grandpa who died from cancer before she was born and we didnt tell her about it, she was little.. She also got sad whenever she saw people smoking. She said other things. She has an old soul.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
i totally believe in it! love cyndi, too!
a great free verse flowing smoothly down the page
i like how you started and ended with time after time
nice!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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i totally believe in it! love cyndi, too!
a great free verse flowing smoothly down the page
i like how you started and ended with time after time
nice!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
Thank you for the Author's Notes about reincarnation. I was actually thinking that with your words "at the shore of infinity" which just felt so rich and nearly palpable they fit together so beautifully. Oy! Such a knack you have!
I used to not believe in reincarnation, but then I read that it would explain savants and prodigies, and I had to acquiesce that it does. The music teacher in me actually loves the idea that someone's life work and expertise can be replanted into a new soul. It feels like such a perfect circle to me. Otherwise, it's like a beautiful dessert that just goes to waste.
Thanks for a(n obviously!) thought-provoking read, Gypsy. That's how you know when it's a great write: when people do more than just review it and say, "Okay - NEXT?!" This one's going to stay with me all night. Thank you for that.
xoxox
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the Author's Notes about reincarnation. I was actually thinking that with your words "at the shore of infinity" which just felt so rich and nearly palpable they fit together so beautifully. Oy! Such a knack you have!
I used to not believe in reincarnation, but then I read that it would explain savants and prodigies, and I had to acquiesce that it does. The music teacher in me actually loves the idea that someone's life work and expertise can be replanted into a new soul. It feels like such a perfect circle to me. Otherwise, it's like a beautiful dessert that just goes to waste.
Thanks for a(n obviously!) thought-provoking read, Gypsy. That's how you know when it's a great write: when people do more than just review it and say, "Okay - NEXT?!" This one's going to stay with me all night. Thank you for that.
xoxox
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I believe the spirit never dies and the body just changes form. There is no birth and death. Like a cloud never ceases to be...it just changes to rain to fog to cloud etc
Thank you very much, Rachelle.
I appreciate your kind and insightful review.
Gypsy hugs
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Oh my! I'm going to have to give that some thought! Thanks for that. xo
Comment from royowen
I think there's not a soul that has faith in an afterlife that hasn't wondered what it will be like. Endless joy, in a place beauteous beyond description, that's what we've got to look forward to. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I think there's not a soul that has faith in an afterlife that hasn't wondered what it will be like. Endless joy, in a place beauteous beyond description, that's what we've got to look forward to. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much Roy
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Most welcome