Old Justice
Where has all the justice gone?2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You notes are appreciated.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You make a good point about punishment
and relating it to the crime.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You notes are appreciated.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You make a good point about punishment
and relating it to the crime.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
Comment from Dr. Nad
Job well done in taking into account the limitations you were given. This reminds me of a Wayback time when my mother tried to convince me that her punishment fit my crime.
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Job well done in taking into account the limitations you were given. This reminds me of a Wayback time when my mother tried to convince me that her punishment fit my crime.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024