Seriously?!
I Say Stormy Is An Earth Angel...Stormy Says...2 total reviews
Comment from Mark Jackson
I really like this, I love the way you compliment you girlfriend and I love her response. I really love the mention of being disappointed with the real me. The the final line is just great. Unfortunately you just took the definition of modesty straight out of Dictionary.com. I have taken quotes out of other peoples work and put it on my own however I have referenced this making it plain this is not my work. You failed to do this even in your notes. I have docked a point let me know if you rectify the fact in your notes would be fine by me and I will adjust. Cheers.
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I really like this, I love the way you compliment you girlfriend and I love her response. I really love the mention of being disappointed with the real me. The the final line is just great. Unfortunately you just took the definition of modesty straight out of Dictionary.com. I have taken quotes out of other peoples work and put it on my own however I have referenced this making it plain this is not my work. You failed to do this even in your notes. I have docked a point let me know if you rectify the fact in your notes would be fine by me and I will adjust. Cheers.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
Comment from jessizero
I like that you see the wonderful things in Stormy that she doesn't see herself. I loved your last line: "And I love her." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I like that you see the wonderful things in Stormy that she doesn't see herself. I loved your last line: "And I love her." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024