Could This Be...?
It happened later in life3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ahhh, kissing! In my husband's words, "It's the straw that stirs the drink." I couldn't agree more. Nice photo to accentuate your beautiful words, too. She definitely looks dazed from a really good smooch! Good luck to you in the contest, Mystery Poet! xo
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Ahhh, kissing! In my husband's words, "It's the straw that stirs the drink." I couldn't agree more. Nice photo to accentuate your beautiful words, too. She definitely looks dazed from a really good smooch! Good luck to you in the contest, Mystery Poet! xo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Thank you your review has cheered me!
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I'm so glad to read that!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Despite it didn't work out , time heals broken hearts, and now the gorgeous lass is willing to give love another chance.
A topic sadly many can connect too. ( sigh)
NB this is a ONE 5-7-5 contest.
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Ciao!
Despite it didn't work out , time heals broken hearts, and now the gorgeous lass is willing to give love another chance.
A topic sadly many can connect too. ( sigh)
NB this is a ONE 5-7-5 contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent pair of 5-7-5 poems for the contest
connecting the past and present, something many experience.
I assume two are allowed by the rules.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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This is an excellent pair of 5-7-5 poems for the contest
connecting the past and present, something many experience.
I assume two are allowed by the rules.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thanksd Robert Apparently not so but I have altered it slightly