5-7-5 (growing old with you)
5-7-5 romance2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like your take on growing older together.
-I haven't stopped to think about it, but
we do learn new things as we age.
-I like your last line with the alliteration
and the contrast in feelings.
-A very good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like your take on growing older together.
-I haven't stopped to think about it, but
we do learn new things as we age.
-I like your last line with the alliteration
and the contrast in feelings.
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you dear pam <3
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You are welcome.
Comment from hullabaloo22
This is a wonderful piece of poetry about a beautiful and enduring relationship. The middle line makes a great point about how we can always learn something new about a spouse, partner, or friend no matter how long we have known them.
What a great accompanying picture too.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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This is a wonderful piece of poetry about a beautiful and enduring relationship. The middle line makes a great point about how we can always learn something new about a spouse, partner, or friend no matter how long we have known them.
What a great accompanying picture too.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you dear friend <3