Guiding Light
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank you for participating in the haiku club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
Good job
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you for participating in the haiku club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
Good job
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you! I am enjoying being apart of this club. I like the writing challenges.
Comment from jessizero
This was a lovely haiku in just two lines. I admire your message and your rhymes. I also think the picture you supplied added to the feel of the poem. I liked your "guiding lights." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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This was a lovely haiku in just two lines. I admire your message and your rhymes. I also think the picture you supplied added to the feel of the poem. I liked your "guiding lights." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you, I enjoyed writing it.
Comment from kahpot
Love this, I just finished a similar response for the club challenge, the stars and moon are a guiding light, as the if we follow the provided light, we will always find our way, very well written, an excellent poem for this challenge****kahpot
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Love this, I just finished a similar response for the club challenge, the stars and moon are a guiding light, as the if we follow the provided light, we will always find our way, very well written, an excellent poem for this challenge****kahpot
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your feedback. I am enjoying these club challenges. It helps me think outside the box when it comes to my poetry.