Behind Your Eyes
Evil Person3 total reviews
Comment from patricia dillon
One learns when one has met a truly evil person. One is never quite the same. Fortunately they are rare. The most dangerous are those who can put on a show of sincerity.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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One learns when one has met a truly evil person. One is never quite the same. Fortunately they are rare. The most dangerous are those who can put on a show of sincerity.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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TY. Your review is just the response I would hope to hear.
You saw this for what it is, your interpretation spot on.
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It is based on personal experience, unfortunately.
Comment from jessizero
This was kind of dark, but it was well-executed. I also liked your rhymes and the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was kind of dark, but it was well-executed. I also liked your rhymes and the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I really like your poem, as it shows a lot of feeling. The picture adds to it as well. Just a suggestion, but you might want to omit the word "are" from the last stanza. You paint a vivid picture of this person. Great job with this!
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I really like your poem, as it shows a lot of feeling. The picture adds to it as well. Just a suggestion, but you might want to omit the word "are" from the last stanza. You paint a vivid picture of this person. Great job with this!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024