Comment from
Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the What is Truth Writing prompt. Good rhyme pattern and flow. I enjoyed the addition of Braveheart to the poem. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest,
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
Comment from
Julie Helms
Oh my goodness, what's not to love about this!
A suite of limericks
A highlander in a kilt!!
A creative take on the prompt instead of a bash fest
A little naughtiness
Best giggle line:
His cocksuredness never would wilt
A suggestion: that orange/red color is a beauty, but it does weird zingy things to the eyes, making reading difficult. Making the font bolder would really help.
I loved this top to bottom!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
Any positive review from you, Julie, is something to treasure. I?m so glad you liked it. Cheers, Terry.