2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Can You Hear"*
5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I think that sizzling sound you hear is that scorcher of a kiss you just received. Could just be me, I'm pretty sure I'm correct. Thank you for sharing another wonderful poem with us.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I think that sizzling sound you hear is that scorcher of a kiss you just received. Could just be me, I'm pretty sure I'm correct. Thank you for sharing another wonderful poem with us.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. You are correct.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
the setting sun sizzles as it dips into the ocean while the moon dances in a spring shower... wow. loved that image!!
great tanka with a smooth flow. . . thank you for sharing it!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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the setting sun sizzles as it dips into the ocean while the moon dances in a spring shower... wow. loved that image!!
great tanka with a smooth flow. . . thank you for sharing it!
shelley :)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Does this mean I'm famous now? Lol. This was awesome. It did take on a special meaning in this. The sizzle added to the way the picture suggested of a passionate moment in time. Love the idea f the cold moon dancing with the spring rain. Beautiful imagery. Gretchen
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Does this mean I'm famous now? Lol. This was awesome. It did take on a special meaning in this. The sizzle added to the way the picture suggested of a passionate moment in time. Love the idea f the cold moon dancing with the spring rain. Beautiful imagery. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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hehe... yes, you are famous (*=*) Thank you very much, Gretchen.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Good pictures and good poetry. The weather is still kicking my butt. Not writing much. Sleeping and binging on Brit Box. Watching Agatha Christie stuff lately. Good Work Karen
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Good pictures and good poetry. The weather is still kicking my butt. Not writing much. Sleeping and binging on Brit Box. Watching Agatha Christie stuff lately. Good Work Karen
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Karen
Gypsy hugs
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:-)
Comment from royowen
I love the passion with which you write this, the last time I can remember that almost unbridled passion was in my teens, but I'm glad it's not like that anymore, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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I love the passion with which you write this, the last time I can remember that almost unbridled passion was in my teens, but I'm glad it's not like that anymore, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Yes, love in the long run transcends into a different kind of love.
Thank you very much, Roy.
Gypsy hugs
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That?s true, or emotion. We confuse emotion with love