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5 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
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This poem is not only beautiful, it's very sensual in an innocent way. I like that. I could feel the emotion. Once again you shared your God given talent with us. Thank you.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Barbara,

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi MariVal,
firstly let me say... to reference, 'a thousand splendid suns'... only a thousand splendid sun can break up the haziness of miserable fate surrounding every women, but still have a thousand splendid sun shine every women to give them persistence and hope. That's gold!

Great use of refrain 'my beloved' using five senses of sensuality differently, yet all alluding to the very same emotion.

To see, taste, touch, smell and hear your persistent hope is such a wonderful thought to live in for 'us' romantically passionate souls...
and I'm sure Khaled Hussein would be honoured in the way you choose to use the magic words in such a passionate way.

A truly stunning presentation MariVal.

With our thoughts we create...
the strength of belief.

Warmest regards,
James.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    James, it's so good to hear from you.as always, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and insightful feedback. You know what the poem is about at a deep level. I loved the Khaled Hussein's book and the title is so unique it tucked with me.

    I'm happy you like this poem.

    Con cariņo

    Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
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sweet gogyohka love suite
good use of all the senses
with nice imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I'm amazed at the different and varied ways you can describe a romantic encounter. I always enjoyed reading George R. R. Martin. The man could describe rain in so many breathtaking ways. I started to look at rainy weather in a whole different way. Your romantic poems are like that. Great job. Gretchen

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Wow, thank your wonderful review. I will check out .... I'm a very visual person and it shows in my writing. Thank you for introducing me to George R. R. Martin.
Comment from royowen
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Very sensual are these poems, of enjoying the sensations of these times we spend with our beloved one, the touch of the fingers on the skin, that filters through to the soul, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Ray. (*÷*)

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 20-Mar-2024
    A pleasure