Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
I like the truth behind this humorous piece. Though frying plantains make them less healthy. I think it is cute that the banana is arresting the plantain. Probably for impersonating him.
I like that the font color matches the characters in the artwork.G
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of your day and week.
Joan

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024

Thanks very much Joan! Glad you enjoyed this piece.

reply by dragonpoet on 20-Mar-2024

You are most kindly welclome.
Joan

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

haha. I thought this was terrific. I love the second stanza. It's so evil! This is very creative. Your poem is fun and enjoyable and I love how you just have fun with these plantains!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024

Thanks so much! More entries in the plantain series are coming soon!

SS

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Exceptional

There is a hidden meaning behind these words as we misunderstand other cultures and traditions and try to make everyone conform to a governed regimen. I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024

Thank you Dolly for the kind words, killer rating and sharp observations. This is part 9 in an ongoing series (linked in series at the bottom of each piece) in case you are interested in seeing more of these sorts of short pieces.

Best, SS

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 21-Mar-2024

You are most welcome x