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Lifetime

We live and die on earth's time.

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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That's life as they say, we don't live forever, but what matters most is what we do during our lifetime and whether it is of a good quality, a poignant post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from jessizero
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Your last line didn't make perfect sense, but that could just be me. You did get the syllable count right, though. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
    Thank you!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
    I have changed the last line to make it sense.
reply by jessizero on 16-Mar-2024
    It does make more sense now.