2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "~ Cobalt Sky ~".
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Hahaha. I love the play on words. The visual background and the font were good calls. Very well written and lighthearted. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it very much. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
Hahaha. I love the play on words. The visual background and the font were good calls. Very well written and lighthearted. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed it very much. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Gretchen.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am pretty sure my two boys would appreciate some fish and milk, but they are pretty picky about anything that resembles human food. LOL I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
I am pretty sure my two boys would appreciate some fish and milk, but they are pretty picky about anything that resembles human food. LOL I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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LoL, my cat, ellie, loves treats. I give her treats when I do the dishes so as soon as I get up from my chair she follows me around and if I'm late, she will sit in front of me ...just staring .... lol she is pretty smart.
Thank you very much, Barbara.
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Comment from shelley kaye
hehheh love the little cat ears at the beginning!!
maybe spread out 'g a z e s' and put the A and E in green for eyes?
just a thought ;-)
cute little kitty poem...
thank you for sharing - and meow
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
hehheh love the little cat ears at the beginning!!
maybe spread out 'g a z e s' and put the A and E in green for eyes?
just a thought ;-)
cute little kitty poem...
thank you for sharing - and meow
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Shelley.
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Comment from lyenochka
LoL. I guess that hungry cat can see the fish in the Pisces constellation. ( You might want to fix the spelling) Enjoyed your juxtaposition of the whimsical and astronomy. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
LoL. I guess that hungry cat can see the fish in the Pisces constellation. ( You might want to fix the spelling) Enjoyed your juxtaposition of the whimsical and astronomy. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you, big sister.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What poem about a mythical cat in a Monet like painting. I like the cat eyes before the poem. This is a very smart car, too.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
What poem about a mythical cat in a Monet like painting. I like the cat eyes before the poem. This is a very smart car, too.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Lisa.
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Comment from Glenda Collins
Love! Too cute and clever. Beautiful artwork as always. I do enjoy your creative, thoughtful, and expressive mind. Thank you for sharing. One question though... are you a cat person, dog person, or both ;-)? No judgment either way, just curious. Great job!
Glenda
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
Love! Too cute and clever. Beautiful artwork as always. I do enjoy your creative, thoughtful, and expressive mind. Thank you for sharing. One question though... are you a cat person, dog person, or both ;-)? No judgment either way, just curious. Great job!
Glenda
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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I like cats and dogs. I have a girl cat at home, ellie. My son and daughter have dogs.
Thank you,
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Same! Love all animals really. I have two dogs, used to have a cat, but she is gone now. My granddaughter's name is Ellie😊.
Comment from royowen
I guess that every, or rather, a lot of men, or women, believe that good fortune, or making a fortune, belongs to Lady Luck, or the stars, but I don't, personally, but then, I don't really know. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
I guess that every, or rather, a lot of men, or women, believe that good fortune, or making a fortune, belongs to Lady Luck, or the stars, but I don't, personally, but then, I don't really know. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank God, Roy
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A very good entry for the fifteen syllable poem contest. I loved the mental imagery of a cat looking hungrily to the Milky Way. I have never heard the word Piscis before and so I am not sure whether to ask you what it means or to ask you if you meant it to be Pisces. If it is a typo I thought I'd mention it since this is for a contest. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
A very good entry for the fifteen syllable poem contest. I loved the mental imagery of a cat looking hungrily to the Milky Way. I have never heard the word Piscis before and so I am not sure whether to ask you what it means or to ask you if you meant it to be Pisces. If it is a typo I thought I'd mention it since this is for a contest. Nicely done.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn.
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