Indigestible
get behind me, plantain2 total reviews
Comment from fm wright
Interesting topic. You do realize all three lines must rhyme? I'm sure you can correct it before deadline. The picture does go well with your words. Maybe you can still keep the idea but in rhyme.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Interesting topic. You do realize all three lines must rhyme? I'm sure you can correct it before deadline. The picture does go well with your words. Maybe you can still keep the idea but in rhyme.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for tipping me off. I was so used to these open ended haikus that I forgot to read the rules! FIXED
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I've done that before on a previous work so I could see where you were headed. Look forward to reading the rewrite.
Comment from gramalot8
Very good entry for this contest. Loved your perfect photo choice. I personally love plantains ... my word would have been liver! Lol Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Very good entry for this contest. Loved your perfect photo choice. I personally love plantains ... my word would have been liver! Lol Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Plantains are great cooked with 🍯, just not raw! Thank you!
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