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Naughty Pup

A 1-6-1 poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Exceptional
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Such an adorable picture! You did a great job on your syllable count, as well as on your rhyme scheme. Great job and best of luck!

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
    Thank you ever so much for the rating. I also appreciate the comments and good luck wish.
Comment from RodG
Excellent
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What is it about puppies that make them chew up everything they can get their mouths around? This 1-6-1 depicts one such pup doing mischief to a plastic cup. Your choice of rhymes makes this a strong contest entry. Rod

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
    Thank you for the rating and such encouraging words. Also enjoyed the comments.
Comment from Sally Law
Excellent
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Yes, I certainly know about this. Thank goodness for chew toys for those puppies. Wonderfully crafted and presented in this difficult form.

Sending you my best today as always.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
    Thank you Sally for the review and comments. I used to have a kennel so I took am familiar with these things. I did change things up a bit as I've never had a plastic cup chewed up, only shoes, though I did have one who liked to take plastic ware from off the stove and hide them behind a chair.