Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

Wish I had a six to give. Mine were given out by Monday. Everyone knows to post on Sunday. My mail box is stuffed by then. I need to post again. I have an idea! Karen

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024

I'm new at this. So, we can only give out so many 6 stars? Sunday would be the last day I could post because I'm just too busy. Thank you so much for your help!

reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 13-Apr-2024

You get (6) 6 stars a week and they are given out on Sunday. You can vote for a good reviewer 4 times a month. You can fan a new person 2 times a day. You can post 2 times a day. You can always ask me questions. If I can't answer, I can probably steer you to someone who can. :-) Karen

reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024

wow! Thank you for being so helpful!

Comment from cupa tea

Good

Smoke hovered over the fray like a thundercloud, pregnant with rain.
I like this sentence

I rather felt like this story ended too soon. Just feels like it's missing something.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

Thanks for your input. I tend to have abrupt endings... probably goes along with my personality *grin*!

Comment from lancellot

Exceptional

Well this certainly had an unexpected and impactful ending. Well done. I see a possible winner.

notes:

"Be patient, Johnny. "He'll tire of it soon enuf, and leave ya be."
-"Be patient, Johnny. He'll tire of it soon enuf, and leave ya be."


"Yes sir," Jimmy replied with a salute. Johnny grinned.
-"Yes sir," Jimmy replied with a salute.

Johnny grinned.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

Thanks so much for your review!!