The Visitors
A true story7 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Mama Baer
This was a wonderfully told story about how we can be visited my our relatives from their heavenly home. I like the emotion and metaphor in the story. It is great that you found out of your father's part in this group and him finally getting recognition for it
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Hope this did well in the contest.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S I would like you to know the I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or you can go to Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The Interloper.
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Hi Mama Baer
This was a wonderfully told story about how we can be visited my our relatives from their heavenly home. I like the emotion and metaphor in the story. It is great that you found out of your father's part in this group and him finally getting recognition for it
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Hope this did well in the contest.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S I would like you to know the I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or you can go to Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The Interloper.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This account has many sensory comforting descriptions that hopefully the reader may engage in vicariously. . I love ginkgo leaves we used to take our patients for a walk and I always stopped at the ginkgo tree and I took some of those leaves just to have an example of them. This was a lovely retelling.
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This account has many sensory comforting descriptions that hopefully the reader may engage in vicariously. . I love ginkgo leaves we used to take our patients for a walk and I always stopped at the ginkgo tree and I took some of those leaves just to have an example of them. This was a lovely retelling.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
This is one of those stories I enjoyed from beginning to end. I love birds and especially hummingbirds. I have six feeders out back, and three hummingbird feeders out front. Thanks for sharing.
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This is one of those stories I enjoyed from beginning to end. I love birds and especially hummingbirds. I have six feeders out back, and three hummingbird feeders out front. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I really enjoyed your story. It is well written. I love hummingbirds. Last year. I changed using the red stuff and made my own food. Just Sugar and water. I saw a lot more hummingbirds like 5. One even came close to me on the porch. They are truly amazing creatures. Your story flowed very nicely. I really enjoyed it. Great job
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I really enjoyed your story. It is well written. I love hummingbirds. Last year. I changed using the red stuff and made my own food. Just Sugar and water. I saw a lot more hummingbirds like 5. One even came close to me on the porch. They are truly amazing creatures. Your story flowed very nicely. I really enjoyed it. Great job
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I believe loved ones Spirits do visit and come through to us. It's happened to me and there are always clues or coincidences, signs. This story is well written and interesting. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes,
Alex
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I believe loved ones Spirits do visit and come through to us. It's happened to me and there are always clues or coincidences, signs. This story is well written and interesting. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
Comment from Kelly Hope
This was a very interesting read. I'm almost certain. I will have to go back and reread this a second time to really understand this the write way. Very great job.
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This was a very interesting read. I'm almost certain. I will have to go back and reread this a second time to really understand this the write way. Very great job.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Welcome back! So good to read this post as I remember you had shared about selling your family home during the April poetry contest. And now you share about your remarkable father and the little miracles of how the Lord allowed him to still communicate with you as you continue to honor him with your writings and that SHINE project. Best wishes in the contest!
Can you give more info about SHINE in your notes?
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Welcome back! So good to read this post as I remember you had shared about selling your family home during the April poetry contest. And now you share about your remarkable father and the little miracles of how the Lord allowed him to still communicate with you as you continue to honor him with your writings and that SHINE project. Best wishes in the contest!
Can you give more info about SHINE in your notes?
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much! It's been a long while. Thank you for remembering about my poetry of our family home. You seem like a dear friend. What a great suggestion! I will add my notes about the SHINE program. I appreciate you!