Lazy Day
now long gone4 total reviews
Comment from LoAnn Beery
What a great memory you evoked in me. I missed watching it this Christmas and I felt sad. You put some very difficult words together to bring this Senryu to life, and it turned out
beautifully.
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What a great memory you evoked in me. I missed watching it this Christmas and I felt sad. You put some very difficult words together to bring this Senryu to life, and it turned out
beautifully.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, I miss those Saturdays too -- we used to get two features and three cartoons at the movie theatre when I was a child, and I spent nearly every Saturday at the matinee. :) Your senryu brings the happy memory flooding back.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Oh, I miss those Saturdays too -- we used to get two features and three cartoons at the movie theatre when I was a child, and I spent nearly every Saturday at the matinee. :) Your senryu brings the happy memory flooding back.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Many thanks for reding and writing!
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My pleasure. :)
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Your pleasure is my reading pleasure.
Comment from RodG
Those old theaters that had Saturday matinees were terrific. A few remain that sometimes revive a classic. The Speaker here relives those days with DVDs. Not a bad idea. Your poem recaptures the FEELING of those lazy Saturdays. Rod
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Those old theaters that had Saturday matinees were terrific. A few remain that sometimes revive a classic. The Speaker here relives those days with DVDs. Not a bad idea. Your poem recaptures the FEELING of those lazy Saturdays. Rod
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for reading and your very kind words!
Comment from Sally Law
My Saturdays were like this growing up for a few hours anyway. Mama worked hard and weekdays were long with a lot of responsibility for me. Saturdays were for outdoor play and American Bandstand. A delightful poem that brought back so much. Sending you my nest today as always andnest wishes for the contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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My Saturdays were like this growing up for a few hours anyway. Mama worked hard and weekdays were long with a lot of responsibility for me. Saturdays were for outdoor play and American Bandstand. A delightful poem that brought back so much. Sending you my nest today as always andnest wishes for the contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much! I always ask God for writing or musical cues to write. Today, the song, "My Lazy Day" popped into my mind.