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A third party for President 2024

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Comment from Douglas Goff
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Interesting dialogue. I think I came into the middle of this.

This was a belly-buster crack-up:
Skar: Right! This sounds like pedophiles.

Very enjoyable.
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 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Hopefully it will be cru=isp enough to begin here without a lot of backstory.
Comment from kahpot
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Wonderful, and thanks for the entire list of characters, reading through them brought back some scenes from old, and yes a change of groupie name might be advisable, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thank you, kahpot.
Comment from jim vecchio
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Your characters were longer than this installment, but I'm glad you placed them here. I am hoping your nominee will win as he is one candidate the TV polls haven't yet told us is winning or losing. That causes people to abstain from voting, as they feel it's not worth the bother.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
    It's a childish reaction to not necessarily getting what one wants. "I simply won't play." one might say, with a pout.
reply by jim vecchio on 05-Apr-2024
    I just wish it wasn't our country at stake. But God may just give us what we deserve.
Comment from lyenochka
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Good to see the crew back and thanks for the list because it's easy to forget the lesser known ones. Good that LorDee has stepped down and is supporting Ned.

Ned for Prez!

I need to find my brother Lowel. (Lowell)

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
    I gave Lowell his L back.
reply by lyenochka on 05-Apr-2024
    He'd never be confused for No-el.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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What did I just read?! lol I am confused. I am frustrated. I am feeling like either writing a poem or telling a fart joke. Whatever it was. I liked it.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
    If you liked that, you'll be very happy as it goes on.
Comment from nomi338
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Okay, now that this issue is settled, my burning question has to be, "What the heck happens next?" Who is gonna live, who is gonna die, and who the heck really cares?

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
    Ned lives, sort of.
Comment from BethShelby
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Lets hope you can get his name on the ballot before November. At least he seems harmless and maybe that is the best we can hope for. There have been many characters that seemed to have dropped by the wayside.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
    I probably started too early and got off the beam a lot.
Comment from royowen
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It's wonderful to see all these intellectual giants all gathered in one place, and the good thing is these are probably all younger than Trump or Biden, at last perhaps we'll get some young progressives, great post Bill, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
    I will attempt to bend this fiction around the factual election.
reply by royowen on 05-Apr-2024
    That?s good