2023 Gypsy's Clubs
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "~ In Your Eyes ~".
4 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, with such passion the eyes can light fires, and reveal our true feelings, love the connection between the eyes, and the soul, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
Beautiful, with such passion the eyes can light fires, and reveal our true feelings, love the connection between the eyes, and the soul, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, kym.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Very passionate poem. I love how the love is kindled by simply looking in your lovers eyes. I could see the imagery of the flames reflected in their eyes. Great romantic and sensual poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
Very passionate poem. I love how the love is kindled by simply looking in your lovers eyes. I could see the imagery of the flames reflected in their eyes. Great romantic and sensual poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much Gretchen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
cool pic and cool descriptions
love the "the sun rising in your soul" part
great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
cool pic and cool descriptions
love the "the sun rising in your soul" part
great imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy
Comment from Elise H
Hi there. I love ekphrastic poetry and this is the first one I've found since stumbling onto this site a few days ago. Thanks for sharing!
I like how you worked the color into your poem too, making it part of the overall art work. It felt cohesive matched your chosen picture well.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
Hi there. I love ekphrastic poetry and this is the first one I've found since stumbling onto this site a few days ago. Thanks for sharing!
I like how you worked the color into your poem too, making it part of the overall art work. It felt cohesive matched your chosen picture well.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Elise. Welcome to fanstory, let me know if you need help.
Gypsy