Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very lovely Ode to Autumn you have penned for the writing prompt contest. I love pumpkin pies. This is a great 5-7-5 with great descriptive words and great imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024

Thank you for your review and kind words. I love baking, And right now my 11year old granddaughter is spending the night with me, we have baked a chocolate cake, sugar cookies and snicker doodles. All for her to take home to her mom and brothers. Have a good night.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Sounds yummy! I thought you did a great job with this poem. Just 17 syllables but you share a love of autumn and pumpkin pies in just those three lines. Very nicely done.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024

Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate it. I love baking when it is cool. Sometimes I 'll bake just to take the chill out of the house.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

You got the syllable count right, and I liked your rhymes. I don't like pumpkin pie, but you make it sound like fun to bake them. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024

Thank you for your review I do appreciate it. I love baking. Pumpkin pie is one of my sons favorite pie.