Flowering Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Running Thoughts"A book of my Love poems.
3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
Times been sold then brought . Pretty sure you mean (Time's for Time has & move the period closer to 'bought.')
No longer the younger man but remains with "Newer of Thought." . (not sure why this random period is after the quotation marks)
God,so much. (space after the comma)
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
Times been sold then brought . Pretty sure you mean (Time's for Time has & move the period closer to 'bought.')
No longer the younger man but remains with "Newer of Thought." . (not sure why this random period is after the quotation marks)
God,so much. (space after the comma)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you Barbara for the corrections and I'm still working very hard at both my writings and my relationship.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem does such a wonderful job of sharing your love of God and your faith. I thought each stanza was powerful and I greatly enjoyed reading your poem.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
Your poem does such a wonderful job of sharing your love of God and your faith. I thought each stanza was powerful and I greatly enjoyed reading your poem.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thanks Michael I've been trying very hard to do that.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Julie Helms
You are doing some good deep soul-searching in this piece. I am curious as to why you did not put it under a poem format box, instead of the prose box. It would just format better that way.
Some typo possibilities:
Times been sold then brought (bought?)
Earth's horrid of *Vault. (Would read better without "of")
Thank you for sharing! Julie
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
You are doing some good deep soul-searching in this piece. I am curious as to why you did not put it under a poem format box, instead of the prose box. It would just format better that way.
Some typo possibilities:
Times been sold then brought (bought?)
Earth's horrid of *Vault. (Would read better without "of")
Thank you for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thanks Julie for your kind thoughts and suggestions.
What you got to realize about me is I was never interested in grammar as a child nor reading or writing and that everything I do now is a gift.
Doctor Ricky