Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

This contest is supposed to be a poem.
You certainly have envisioned a hideous future for America. There is good horror in your story. I just don't think it fits this contest/prompt for a poem.

Thanks for sharing!
Julie

Edited: re-rated for fix

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024

thanks I will look again and re-submit

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

How awful to gain freedom by killing others, but this is the story of human nature and how we fight and often die to gain our liberty and our history is littered with such a terrible legacy, a poignant post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024

thanks