Comment from
Tre way
U4 writing could use a little bit more and she get words that you were using I guess with Bibliophile but you had no finesse with this I don't understand where you're going I mean I understand where you were going with it but you just did not you did not put your all into this at all you just put some s*** out just cuz you could and I don't respect it and I don't like it and I gave you three stars cuz I'm being nice but yeah this is bad like really stop put some heart into this s***
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
A good book is an excellent subject for the contest. This is well written with a good story sequence and imagery. The rhymes are natural and many readers will relate to this topic. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Ale
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024