2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "When I'm Sixty Four".
9 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I knew a man who divorced his wife, because she put on a few pounds, not a lot, but a few after their five children were born. My thoughts on this, is if it's unconditional true, love, that would never have happened, because he loved her spirit, her heart, not her figure. That doesn't change who she is. Maybe it's just me. Thank you for sharing this poem and causing me to ponder.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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I knew a man who divorced his wife, because she put on a few pounds, not a lot, but a few after their five children were born. My thoughts on this, is if it's unconditional true, love, that would never have happened, because he loved her spirit, her heart, not her figure. That doesn't change who she is. Maybe it's just me. Thank you for sharing this poem and causing me to ponder.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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You are right, Barbara, unconditionally love is for better or worse regardless what we look like or if we get sick.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----I'm not quite there yet, but let's just say I feel what Paul
McCartney must have felt when he wrote the lyrics to the song of the same title, about what then he saw as ancient, and he had many, many years to go before he got to that age, disbelief
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----I'm not quite there yet, but let's just say I feel what Paul
McCartney must have felt when he wrote the lyrics to the song of the same title, about what then he saw as ancient, and he had many, many years to go before he got to that age, disbelief
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Yes, when I was young I thought 64 was very old but it's not. Maybe times have changed.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
not a beatles fan, but i liked this poem -
a wistful dreamy romance that lasts for life... nice.
good imagery and word choices
and a smooth flow through out the lines
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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not a beatles fan, but i liked this poem -
a wistful dreamy romance that lasts for life... nice.
good imagery and word choices
and a smooth flow through out the lines
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I used to listen to that song wen I was quite young. Sixty-four sounded so old. I had a vision of two decrepit gray hairs holding on to each other. I'm sixty-two now and have a very different view. My how things change. Gretchen
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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I used to listen to that song wen I was quite young. Sixty-four sounded so old. I had a vision of two decrepit gray hairs holding on to each other. I'm sixty-two now and have a very different view. My how things change. Gretchen
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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That's true, I told Barbara the same. When I was young Sixty Four sounded old but now not so much.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
Thanks for sharing your sweet Valentine's Day poem.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were Excellent and Exceptional as Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a wonderful y.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thanks for sharing your sweet Valentine's Day poem.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were Excellent and Exceptional as Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a wonderful y.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Beautiful, I have copied and pasted quite a few of your free verse, (hope this is OK,) as I am trying to learn, you incorporate such feeling, though from a song, your words have added feeling, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Beautiful, I have copied and pasted quite a few of your free verse, (hope this is OK,) as I am trying to learn, you incorporate such feeling, though from a song, your words have added feeling, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. It's okay.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
OMGosh, beautiful from start to ending. Your romantic free verses take my breath away, touches the soul in your sweet and loving words in this poem. Just something about the message of tenderness and mature love that lasts forever.
WOW! I used every six I had already. I know, it is only Monday. That never happens. But please accept my virtual 25 for this one. I loved it that much. In fact, LOL, maybe I will hire you to write my wedding vows for May. My husband and I are going to repeat our vows in the church on our fiftieth wedding anniversary. I always wished we had done it there in the first place, but we were young, I was 18 and we eloped. Tried it on our fortieth but I was sick on the couch with cancer, so that didn't work.
I'm sorry, don't know why I am going on and on, but you feel like one of my best friends. Anyway, I just wanted you to know how much I admire you and your lovely poem. It was exquisite. May have been my favorite so far. Lotsa Love, Debi
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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OMGosh, beautiful from start to ending. Your romantic free verses take my breath away, touches the soul in your sweet and loving words in this poem. Just something about the message of tenderness and mature love that lasts forever.
WOW! I used every six I had already. I know, it is only Monday. That never happens. But please accept my virtual 25 for this one. I loved it that much. In fact, LOL, maybe I will hire you to write my wedding vows for May. My husband and I are going to repeat our vows in the church on our fiftieth wedding anniversary. I always wished we had done it there in the first place, but we were young, I was 18 and we eloped. Tried it on our fortieth but I was sick on the couch with cancer, so that didn't work.
I'm sorry, don't know why I am going on and on, but you feel like one of my best friends. Anyway, I just wanted you to know how much I admire you and your lovely poem. It was exquisite. May have been my favorite so far. Lotsa Love, Debi
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Congratulations, Debi!!!
fiftieth wedding anniversary? That's awesome. Then this poem fits in nicely for you. Thank you very much for sharing part of your life with me. You had some very challenging events but look at you. You are so talented and hind. May God bless you.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading this. The poem was very good. The picture goes well with the words. Great job. Well written I like the colors. The picture is unique.
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I enjoyed reading this. The poem was very good. The picture goes well with the words. Great job. Well written I like the colors. The picture is unique.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I remember that Beatles' song! And I think this would be great for the Valentine's Day contest. Yours feels more confident that the love is "evergreen" and will continue beyond the 60s!
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I remember that Beatles' song! And I think this would be great for the Valentine's Day contest. Yours feels more confident that the love is "evergreen" and will continue beyond the 60s!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Yes, I checked but the only thing I haven't done is a romantic story.
Thank you very much, big sister.
BTW I think I have covid. I have really bad cold and I can't smell anything. I'll take a test tomorrow.
I love the Beatles. It's a good band for karaoke... songs are easy to sing and sound good.
Good night!
Love,
Marival
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Okay I'll be praying for healing but I'm really hoping it's not covid!
❤️🙏🙏🙏
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my home covit test this morning is negative but i have symptoms so who knows I'm glad i don't have it, i dont want to be locked up in my room lol