2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Frigid Marble Tomb"*
6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When I read these poems, I think of Dean myself. He was one our greats, as you are. This presentation is perfect. I doubt you can outdo this one, but I am betting you will. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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When I read these poems, I think of Dean myself. He was one our greats, as you are. This presentation is perfect. I doubt you can outdo this one, but I am betting you will. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Yes, dean was the king of horror on this site.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
he was the horror king of fanstory!
this was a great creepy tanka!
imagery was excellent
and the words flowed smoothly
nice :)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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he was the horror king of fanstory!
this was a great creepy tanka!
imagery was excellent
and the words flowed smoothly
nice :)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
The pictures on this, both of them, added such a creepy element to your already haunting words. I do like the word 'bejewelled'.
This is a great piece so I had to review it.
D
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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The pictures on this, both of them, added such a creepy element to your already haunting words. I do like the word 'bejewelled'.
This is a great piece so I had to review it.
D
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Douglas. I'm happy you like it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from tfawcus
I remember Dean's horror stories fondly! You have created an eerie atmosphere with this one and I love that last line, 'as crickets serenade the silence'. Every creak and howl heightens the senses in a midnight graveyard.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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I remember Dean's horror stories fondly! You have created an eerie atmosphere with this one and I love that last line, 'as crickets serenade the silence'. Every creak and howl heightens the senses in a midnight graveyard.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Tony. I'm happy you like it.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Even though this is a horror Tanka, I don't find it scary. It's full of positive words like "bejewelled" and "serenate the silence". I like the alliteration in the last line, too.
Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Even though this is a horror Tanka, I don't find it scary. It's full of positive words like "bejewelled" and "serenate the silence". I like the alliteration in the last line, too.
Well done.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Lisa. I don't think it's scary but some of my reviewers may.
Thank you very much.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for keeping Dean's memory alive. Your pictures are a lot less scary than Dean's choices! ð???
I like how you bring in nature to help with the mourning such as the owl asking "Who" and the crickets serenading.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thanks for keeping Dean's memory alive. Your pictures are a lot less scary than Dean's choices! ð???
I like how you bring in nature to help with the mourning such as the owl asking "Who" and the crickets serenading.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Yes, dean's poems and pictures were scarier .. we both loved horror movies and poems and stories he thought he could talk to Edgar Allan Poe... some stuff was pretty weird. I don't want to scary you guys too much (*÷*)
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival