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2024 Gypsy's Tanka

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I told my husband I want to be cremated because I don't do bugs. He said bugs don't get in coffins. I don't want to take any chances. I am very allergic to insects. One bit can put me in the hospital. Your poem is extremely well written.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara. I don't like bugs either.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Marival, when we die my sweet friend our
spirits rise to the heavens...and our shells turn
to the ground...ashes to ashes...dust to dust...
pending on how you want your remains to be
handled...

love your poem sweet girl...and so love your pictures...
very well written...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Love you.

    Marival
reply by l.raven on 12-Feb-2024
    your always so welcome my sweet
    friend...love xxoo 😊🌼🙏💝
Comment from lyenochka
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I like your reference to the phoenix in your tanka. It's a great symbol of rebirth and we know that our earthly bodies are not what we will have in eternity!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister. Yes, we are pure spirit and soul for eternity.

    Love,

    Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
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yup!! bodies are just insect food... our souls live on...

great jisei poem!
awesome pics
good imagery
and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
    Thank you, Shelley. We share a lot, girl. LoL

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed reading this. The wording is very good. Also , the different colors you put the words in adds an extra touch. The pictures are amazing. I liked everything about it

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs