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I Didn't Write This!

Marvin did

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Comment from Jasmine Girl
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Marvin Rumsey, being clumsy, wrote a good silly poem with his two left feet. I think you are lazy because you get the clumsy Marvin Rumsey to write your silly poem and you even use it to enter a contest.

Well done and good luck.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
    Thanks for the great review. :)
Comment from Sally Law
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This is adorable and so creative. I'm sorry to have missed this contest. I hope you did well. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your writing journey.
Sal xoxo

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
    Thanks for this nice review. I didn't place in the contest, but it was fun. :)
Comment from LJbutterfly
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You did an excellent job creating a funny, silly poem about a character who has a tendency to sabotage good writing. He has the perfect name, and I think I've met him a few times snooping around my work. Humorous poem.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
    Thanks so much, l'm so happy to hear from you. :)
Comment from Janet Foor
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A silly poem for sure. I know that Marvin did it - I could tell by the artwork. It has Marvin written all over it.

Fun and funny.

Blessings and good luck
Janet

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
    Hahahaha! Thank you so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Silly and fun and everything required of this contest brief! I like his name, his clumsiness and the fact that he's responsible for this entry and will have to collect all his winnings at the end. A great entry in well metered and rhyming verse. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much, l appreciate it. :)
Comment from Navada
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I really like the creation of a silly character to take the blame for us when things get bumfuzzled and don't come out right - what a great idea! Best wishes for the contest. :)

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
    Thank you, i'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Caroline M England
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Love this! It made me laugh - great idea and entry to the competition with nice reference to the contest. Marvin Rumsy is a great name. A romping good read with great pace. I'd love to see another word instead of tripped used twice - slipped maybe? I like the use of poem as one syllable - the word said in this way has a lovely humorous tone.

I struggled with the cadence in your last two lines - but I guess that was Marvin's two two left feet that were to blame!

Very enjoyable thanks
Best wishes
Caroline

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
    Thank you for this wonderful review, l appreciate it so much. :)
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi
This poem does fit the contest well.
Maybe Marvin Rumsey is a metaphor for a missing Muse. It has a feeling of writer's block that has finally gotten broken. Do we take credit for our good poems and blame someone/something else for our bad ones.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
    Thank you, l appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from sherrygreywolf
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Hilarious! But why blame this poor clumsy fool - looks like he got the job done for you in his own goofy fashion. Great entry to the Silly Poem contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
    You're right! Thanks for this nice review. :)
Comment from Lisasview
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Great image and oh such a funny and well rhymed poem dear mystery writer.
Perfect for the silly contest which I am about to vote for... So I wish you the very best of luck........................
Lisasview...spelling out my whole name just incase you do not know me....

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
    Thank you! I'm always glad to hear from you. :)