Pop The Cherry
A saga of epic proportions and nonsensical merriment.26 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Doug,
Congrats on your 1st place win in the Let's Kill Karen Contest. This write is truly a saga of epic proportions and nonsensical merriment saturated with skillfully written creative lines of humorous satire. I don;t know if you ever saw the first satirical James Bond movie the 1967 spy parody comedy of "Casino Royale" but your story reminds me of the movie. It is hilarious. Well done.
staring
David Niven - Sir James Bond
Peter Sellers - Evelyn Tremble (James Bond - 007)
Ursula Andress - Vesper Lynd (007)
Orson Welles - Le Chiffre
Joanna Pettet - Mata Bond
Terence Cooper -Cooper (James Bond - 007)
John Huston -McTarry (M)
Barbara Bouchet - Moneypenny
Woody Allen - Jimmy Bond (Dr. Noah)
Permission granted to include me and all the other Fanstory writers in your Bond-like spy masterpiece.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Doug,
Congrats on your 1st place win in the Let's Kill Karen Contest. This write is truly a saga of epic proportions and nonsensical merriment saturated with skillfully written creative lines of humorous satire. I don;t know if you ever saw the first satirical James Bond movie the 1967 spy parody comedy of "Casino Royale" but your story reminds me of the movie. It is hilarious. Well done.
staring
David Niven - Sir James Bond
Peter Sellers - Evelyn Tremble (James Bond - 007)
Ursula Andress - Vesper Lynd (007)
Orson Welles - Le Chiffre
Joanna Pettet - Mata Bond
Terence Cooper -Cooper (James Bond - 007)
John Huston -McTarry (M)
Barbara Bouchet - Moneypenny
Woody Allen - Jimmy Bond (Dr. Noah)
Permission granted to include me and all the other Fanstory writers in your Bond-like spy masterpiece.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Eugene. No, I have never seen that movie but now I plan to watch it this week. Appreciate you!!!
Comment from Debbie Pope
I loved this, Douglas. What a clever thing to write. I love the double meaning of your ending. Fanstory is always in need of new writers--even if you don't kill us all off.
Being a member of the Triple D's was a privilege. Thanks for including me. I am sure I would be a great bodyguard.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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I loved this, Douglas. What a clever thing to write. I love the double meaning of your ending. Fanstory is always in need of new writers--even if you don't kill us all off.
Being a member of the Triple D's was a privilege. Thanks for including me. I am sure I would be a great bodyguard.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. This was fun! Glad you enjoyed it! I appreciate the sixer!
D
Comment from Faith Williams
Oh my! Now that was hilarious, Douglas! I couldn't stop laughing. Well-deserved win! I love how you included so many FanStory writers. Congratulations on the win!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Oh my! Now that was hilarious, Douglas! I couldn't stop laughing. Well-deserved win! I love how you included so many FanStory writers. Congratulations on the win!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Oh my goodness you are such a sweet angel! I am so glad you laughed. I knew I had something here because I couldn't stop laughing as I wrote it! Appreciate you, always!
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. You certainly made an enjoyable post and making it an all out Who's Who on Fanstory in the process. I'm honored that you would add me into the mix. Congratulations - AGAIN!!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Lol. You certainly made an enjoyable post and making it an all out Who's Who on Fanstory in the process. I'm honored that you would add me into the mix. Congratulations - AGAIN!!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you! This one turned out quite funny. You know you are on a good path when you are laughing at your own work as you write.
Comment from jessizero
I can see why this piece won! It was very fun to see you play with FanStory writers, and I'm so lucky to have been included. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I can see why this piece won! It was very fun to see you play with FanStory writers, and I'm so lucky to have been included. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Appreciate it! I put people that I enjoy on the site.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I did notice that you included some writers in your story. I find some of this story scientific fiction. This is a category that makes a person's body create chills.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I did notice that you included some writers in your story. I find some of this story scientific fiction. This is a category that makes a person's body create chills.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Awesome. Writing, for me, has always been about eliciting reactions from my readers. I do hope you found a chuckle here or there.
Comment from Baltimore Born
Now that was a story. There was so much drama and action from beginning to end. The gangster feel in this story was very good. Once I began reading it, I was captivated by the diversity of the characters and their roles. Very creative and entertaining story.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Now that was a story. There was so much drama and action from beginning to end. The gangster feel in this story was very good. Once I began reading it, I was captivated by the diversity of the characters and their roles. Very creative and entertaining story.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the super awesome sixer! I am glad you enjoyed this little romp. I find myself wondering if people I killed off will vote for me. Ha!
Comment from Wendy G
Wish I had a six left for this very clever writing, filled with fun and good humour, and skilfully incorporating many FanStorians. So the deed was finally done! Best wishes for your entry. Sounds like a winner.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Wish I had a six left for this very clever writing, filled with fun and good humour, and skilfully incorporating many FanStorians. So the deed was finally done! Best wishes for your entry. Sounds like a winner.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you Wendy! Several clever ones in the contest!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Wow. There is alot going on in this story! I love your imagination and I think an afternoon spent crawling around in your brain might be a fun way to spend time. Very entertaining and the ending did not disappoint. Very good entry for the Let's Kill Karen contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Wow. There is alot going on in this story! I love your imagination and I think an afternoon spent crawling around in your brain might be a fun way to spend time. Very entertaining and the ending did not disappoint. Very good entry for the Let's Kill Karen contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you! If you?re going to crawl around in my brain, bring something for the cobwebs! Glad you liked the ending. Killing Karen was fun. Some good pieces in this one.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Well I think I have the author. Nicely done and a twist at the end. There is no doubt that this Karen knew how to handle herself and that Mr Big Belly had no chance at all. This could be a winner. Have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Well I think I have the author. Nicely done and a twist at the end. There is no doubt that this Karen knew how to handle herself and that Mr Big Belly had no chance at all. This could be a winner. Have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Berry! I think it is a fun one. We shall see how it does.