Life's Twisted Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Life's Twisted Road - Chap 7"Pages turn, stories change, bonds crumble
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
I worked with some of these problems with our abused women. The couple thought it would be so nice to have a baby It would make them closer. However when the baby came between them, he got jealous and now the baby becomes a problem for the marriage. This is well written.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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I worked with some of these problems with our abused women. The couple thought it would be so nice to have a baby It would make them closer. However when the baby came between them, he got jealous and now the baby becomes a problem for the marriage. This is well written.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2024
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I wrote this story right after I returned to FS. My family had been through hell and back and my heart was breaking. So many things went wrong and relationships will never be the same. thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
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I'm glad i am able to know some of your story. Fan story help me a lot too I think to myself if I didn't have fans story I don't know what I would be doing. It's because of fan story that I've been able to write and publish six books. I lost my job and then my former partner passed 3 days later and then my favorite dog past 6 months later. So fan story has been a healer for many of us.
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I send my love and prayers and hope for better days. We need friends to help us through the rough times and I've found that support her.
Smiles and hugs, CArol
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This is a wonderful place to find friends and support and understanding. That's
Comment from prettybluebirds
Sorry, I am so far behind on reviewing your story. I just lost my best friend of twenty-two years today. I had my cat, Blossom, euthanized today because she had late-stage kidney failure and cancer. My heart is sore tonight. This chapter is great, as usual.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Sorry, I am so far behind on reviewing your story. I just lost my best friend of twenty-two years today. I had my cat, Blossom, euthanized today because she had late-stage kidney failure and cancer. My heart is sore tonight. This chapter is great, as usual.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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First, let me extend my sympathy and condolences for your loss. I'm an animal lover and can relate to your pain. It's a honest grief when we lose our best friends.
Never apologize for falling behind. I am thankful that you have taken your precious time to catch up. I hope the story remains entertaining for you.
Do you mind me asking how I can address you? I'd love to use your name.
Hugs, Carol
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My name is April Ruth. I was born on April 2, and my mother liked to use Biblical names, so Ruth.
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Thank you, April. My lovely mother who is now a true angel was born April 1st. Thank you for sharing with me. Have a blessed day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Your honor, let the record show this reviewer opined that said envelope would be cash to get the idiot boyfriend out of the jam (that is Gabby's don't you know.)
Sounds like Dion has a head on his shoulders and a real problem with his good buddy shirking all responsibility...
This gives me hope. (Images of a knight in shining armor are emerging, but alas, there's a long way to go!)
Your writing is as engaging as always, and this story is moving along as realistically as I recall teenagers being (though that was back in the age of the dinosaurs)
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Your honor, let the record show this reviewer opined that said envelope would be cash to get the idiot boyfriend out of the jam (that is Gabby's don't you know.)
Sounds like Dion has a head on his shoulders and a real problem with his good buddy shirking all responsibility...
This gives me hope. (Images of a knight in shining armor are emerging, but alas, there's a long way to go!)
Your writing is as engaging as always, and this story is moving along as realistically as I recall teenagers being (though that was back in the age of the dinosaurs)
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thanks, my friend... Unfortunately, I've been caught up in so much of this wild way of thinking, it makes me shiver. I pray there are some Knights remaining to ride in to save the population in general. My family is a hopeless case and riding off into the sunset would be a better plan.
Hugs, Carol
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I'm an email away...
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Thank you.... it's really been a steep hill this time. You'd think I'd get use to it by now and install an escalator. LOL
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Pardon the pun...but stay "write" here. We love you and no demands!
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Let's pack bags and ponder how much our family will miss us, as we sit --oh, I don't know... in Tuscany? Sampling wine instead of listening to whines?
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I've answered all of your reviews thinking I could save them at once...Nope! Saved one and the others disappeared. so I'll try again.
I appreciate the sentiment and love you too!
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That sounds like a wonderful idea.... I can see us now ....peaceful, laughing and enjoying the view.
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I've come to like White Merlot...
(smile)
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I'm a white zinfandel girl. Also A wine cooler made by Jack Daniels...Southern Comfort Peach. A very mild drink.
Smiles....and more smiles
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi again, Carol! Nearly there. I didn't realize I missed so many chapters!
I like the addition of Dion in this story. He's actually being more responsible than Jason! It would be nice if he could talk his friend into going beyond the current situation to let go of his selfishness and cruelty.
Great job with your plot and character development.
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Hi again, Carol! Nearly there. I didn't realize I missed so many chapters!
I like the addition of Dion in this story. He's actually being more responsible than Jason! It would be nice if he could talk his friend into going beyond the current situation to let go of his selfishness and cruelty.
Great job with your plot and character development.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Dion does represent the person we hope more would be. Unfortunately, bad things happen to good people. Thank you for reading and catching up on the story, but most importantly, for enjoying it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
She'll be better off without Jason, with his self-centred attitude, but Dion seems to have more integrity. Unfortunately he's probably broken a bone or two in his hand. Well written. Engrossing story.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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She'll be better off without Jason, with his self-centred attitude, but Dion seems to have more integrity. Unfortunately he's probably broken a bone or two in his hand. Well written. Engrossing story.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Good morning, Wendy.... Yes, Dion will regret slamming that wall. His hand and arm aren't up to snuff....
Thanks for the support and review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Everyone needs a friend like Dion in their lives. Jason may not realize it now but since his conscience is on vacation, his friend will be that for him. I hope that the coach actually figures it out on his own without Dion having to tell on Jason. Another great chapter, Carol!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Everyone needs a friend like Dion in their lives. Jason may not realize it now but since his conscience is on vacation, his friend will be that for him. I hope that the coach actually figures it out on his own without Dion having to tell on Jason. Another great chapter, Carol!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Yes, Helen, it would be a blessing if everyone had a friend like Dion. Someone to be there without having any other motive but to help. Thanks again... for being you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Another great chapter! I'm glad Dion has a head on his shoulders and is using it. It sounds like the coach is about to find out what's going on with his players. Hopefully he'll be able to talk some sense into Jason. I like what Dion said about being a man and not blaming Gabby. Have a blessed week. Carol
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Another great chapter! I'm glad Dion has a head on his shoulders and is using it. It sounds like the coach is about to find out what's going on with his players. Hopefully he'll be able to talk some sense into Jason. I like what Dion said about being a man and not blaming Gabby. Have a blessed week. Carol
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Oh my...So pleased to see you jumped right into another chapter. Thank you for your time and comments, Carol. I appreciate them very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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It was fun reading 2 back-to-back. Sorry I'm so far behind, but I've been spending many hours at the hospital with my hubby this week. He's still not home today.
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Not to worry...He comes first! I fully understand. I did it for ten years and then...... now I'd give anything to be by his side again.
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Thanks for understanding. He still wasn't able to come home today. Maybe later this week??
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It's better he stays another day or two to make sure he is going to be okay when he comes home. My Mike isn't on going home and two days later the ambulance had to take him back and it was worse. No one wants to be in the hospital but for now it's probably safer. My prayers are with you.
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Yes, I think you are right about his staying. So sorry for your loss of Mike.
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Thank you! I miss him every day and every night. He made me laugh especially on the dark days.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Gabby is in a terrible place and has been left alone to make her decision what she will do about the baby. Dion is proving to be more of a man than his friend Jason, who is being just plain nasty. I didn't catch on that the football coach is also a councilor, which is an unusual combination. I am enjoying this well-written story.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Gabby is in a terrible place and has been left alone to make her decision what she will do about the baby. Dion is proving to be more of a man than his friend Jason, who is being just plain nasty. I didn't catch on that the football coach is also a councilor, which is an unusual combination. I am enjoying this well-written story.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I guess I wasn't clear...which isn't anything unusual with me. the Coach isn't the school counselor, but he does try to council and mentor his players. He's impressed with Dion on and off the field.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You did very well in portraying teenage angst. I do not see any room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. You did very well in portraying teenage angst. I do not see any room for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Good morning! I always enjoy hearing from you and knowing you are enjoying the story. A wonderful way to start my day.
Thank you - Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
AT least Jason's got a decent friend, who instantly saw the problem, and knew morally what the right cause of action was, some kids are like that, they are basically good human beings, the coach seems like a good sort, I see him playing a role in this. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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AT least Jason's got a decent friend, who instantly saw the problem, and knew morally what the right cause of action was, some kids are like that, they are basically good human beings, the coach seems like a good sort, I see him playing a role in this. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much, Roy. I appreciate your comments and the review. Smiles, Carol
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Ymost welcome
