2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Heartless Murder"*
4 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When I read this title, my immediate thought was those pesky crows are at it again. I was right, but they are more than pesky this time, they attacked baby kittens. That's just not right, but it does make for a great poem and wonderful presentation. Thank you.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
When I read this title, my immediate thought was those pesky crows are at it again. I was right, but they are more than pesky this time, they attacked baby kittens. That's just not right, but it does make for a great poem and wonderful presentation. Thank you.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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LoL. Sorry, Barbara, I like a horror poem once in a while. I'm a big horror genre fan.
Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy hugs
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I know you and Dean Kuch did some writing together.
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We did write together. We were good friends. He came to Sacramento,
California to visit me for a week. We had a lot in common. He loved horror poetry so much, whenever I write it I think of him.
Comment from shelley kaye
and no rabbits were harmed in the writing of this tanka...
good one with cool and creepy imagery - crows are fascinating
smooth flow from line to line... nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
and no rabbits were harmed in the writing of this tanka...
good one with cool and creepy imagery - crows are fascinating
smooth flow from line to line... nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Shelley. I always appreciate your kind words. I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Hee Hee I could handle it. I just won't be able to sleep. jk
I really like the artwork and images a lot. Your well-chosen words seem to go hand in hand with these images, too. Excellent writing and presentation! I truly enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alexan
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
Hee Hee I could handle it. I just won't be able to sleep. jk
I really like the artwork and images a lot. Your well-chosen words seem to go hand in hand with these images, too. Excellent writing and presentation! I truly enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alexan
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Awe. Little rabbits about to become a meal for those birds. And crows are smart and conniving at times. Another great Poe inspired poem. I really enjoyed this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
Awe. Little rabbits about to become a meal for those birds. And crows are smart and conniving at times. Another great Poe inspired poem. I really enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
Thank you, I love Edgar Allan Poe.
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