2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "And When I Die".
7 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is heartfelt. Your writing has given us all so much.
The essence of your writing will forevermore fill the air. Great graphics.
Well done, and don't plan on dying yet. You have more writing to do.
Xo. M
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is heartfelt. Your writing has given us all so much.
The essence of your writing will forevermore fill the air. Great graphics.
Well done, and don't plan on dying yet. You have more writing to do.
Xo. M
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You are going to be extremely busy in you everlasting life, but I would expect you to still be you, so of course you would still present beautiful presentations filled with beauty and color. Thank you for sharing. I loved it.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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You are going to be extremely busy in you everlasting life, but I would expect you to still be you, so of course you would still present beautiful presentations filled with beauty and color. Thank you for sharing. I loved it.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
It's just a poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy-----sure sounds like you're going to be busy in the next life; no rest break for you, back to the mines, it is important to set goals for yourself, but come on, take a break, you've earned it!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy-----sure sounds like you're going to be busy in the next life; no rest break for you, back to the mines, it is important to set goals for yourself, but come on, take a break, you've earned it!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
wait... isn't the sky blue because it reflects off the ocean?
love the lines about your spirit's essence giving colours to nature
great imagery and smooth flow throughout
nice. thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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wait... isn't the sky blue because it reflects off the ocean?
love the lines about your spirit's essence giving colours to nature
great imagery and smooth flow throughout
nice. thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Cents be damned! This is a very excellent poem. And, the pictures ate lovely. You should go read some of the entries for my contest. They are very good. I was surprised how one person really let me have it, it is hysterical. I gotta tell you, they are very inventive. If you have the time, go look. Karen
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Cents be damned! This is a very excellent poem. And, the pictures ate lovely. You should go read some of the entries for my contest. They are very good. I was surprised how one person really let me have it, it is hysterical. I gotta tell you, they are very inventive. If you have the time, go look. Karen
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
Gypsy hugs
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Comment from lyenochka
Well, we know God is everywhere so maybe when we die we'll have spiritual bodies which can be everywhere. Maybe in Heaven we'll find out our loved ones in heaven were always close to us!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Well, we know God is everywhere so maybe when we die we'll have spiritual bodies which can be everywhere. Maybe in Heaven we'll find out our loved ones in heaven were always close to us!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
Big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I believe everything is connected too..I believe everything has a spirit and can effect others for good. Your poem is beautiful and every word support what you express in your Author Note. I enjoyed reviewing your entire presentation.
Peace,
Alexan
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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I believe everything is connected too..I believe everything has a spirit and can effect others for good. Your poem is beautiful and every word support what you express in your Author Note. I enjoyed reviewing your entire presentation.
Peace,
Alexan
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
Gypsy hugs