Farewell From the Horizon
sunset poem contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
A very beautifully written sunset poem entry. Great sentiments and matching photo selection. Good Luck in the Sunset photo poem contest and my only wish is that your font color didn't blend in with the background chosen, my color blindness made this difficult to read. Thank you for Sharing
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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A very beautifully written sunset poem entry. Great sentiments and matching photo selection. Good Luck in the Sunset photo poem contest and my only wish is that your font color didn't blend in with the background chosen, my color blindness made this difficult to read. Thank you for Sharing
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Dear QC Poet, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from jim vecchio
This was simply elegant, poem, photo and all. I love that image of moonlight meeting sunlight like entwining lovers. Be careful, someone might steal it some day! Great writing!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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This was simply elegant, poem, photo and all. I love that image of moonlight meeting sunlight like entwining lovers. Be careful, someone might steal it some day! Great writing!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Hi Jim, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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Keep on writing!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love the methaphor:"Golden-white clouds drift in,
Surrounding pale pink rays
I feel a spasm of pain within
As fluorescent beams end these days", it does look lie dying at the end.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Love the methaphor:"Golden-white clouds drift in,
Surrounding pale pink rays
I feel a spasm of pain within
As fluorescent beams end these days", it does look lie dying at the end.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Dear Iza, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Your colorful imagery, and use of a simile, in this poem caught my interest. Your presentation image is very good as well.
A fiery star sinks below the tree line, is a beautiful and unique way to describe a sunset. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Your colorful imagery, and use of a simile, in this poem caught my interest. Your presentation image is very good as well.
A fiery star sinks below the tree line, is a beautiful and unique way to describe a sunset. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Hi Alex, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading this poem. Sunset are so neat. The ones at the beach can be awesome. The picture and words go together very nice. I like your rhymes. Nice job
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed reading this poem. Sunset are so neat. The ones at the beach can be awesome. The picture and words go together very nice. I like your rhymes. Nice job
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Hi Brenda, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from RodG
I am also enchanted by sunsets, especially in the summer. You describe one very well, especially in stanza three using that simile. One small error. PIN in line 5 should be PAIN.
Rod
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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I am also enchanted by sunsets, especially in the summer. You describe one very well, especially in stanza three using that simile. One small error. PIN in line 5 should be PAIN.
Rod
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Hi Rod, thank you for your comments and review. I will go in and edit.