Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I love the idea of the wind carrying the delicious scent and the sound of laughter. This is a perfect contest entry. I enjoyed reading and doubt you'll need it but good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. What a wonderful tanka. That spoke of love and the love was true. I loved the pictures they were beautiful. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a pretty lady. She's like a fairy and I half-imagine her to have wings. I can imagine someone like that having a "delicious scent." My favorite part was the second stanza. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it.

Love,

Marival

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy....if I was judging you you'd win the contest, unfortunately my vote doesn't count. You have a talent for romantic poems, A talent that alludes me!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024

You write songs, that's hard to do.

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

good emotion for the contest
sweet and hot at the same time
nice imagery - love the "wind carries the scent and laughter" parts
smooth flow...

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs