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Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "wordless"keep your hope alive....
14 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a great poem about sadness. Evocative, profound filled with vivid imagery, and packs a punch. I like the black background fits the theme of the poem very well.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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a great poem about sadness. Evocative, profound filled with vivid imagery, and packs a punch. I like the black background fits the theme of the poem very well.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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thank you jake 😁💙🖊️🦄
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I love the image of the tears running down from the eyes. I at first thought this was all the poem was going to be but to my surprise, it was much more than tear-stained eyes but words and lines increasing in saddened emotions until at the end it said the phrase wordless, just like in the title. This is very clever! I love it!
Jesse
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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I love the image of the tears running down from the eyes. I at first thought this was all the poem was going to be but to my surprise, it was much more than tear-stained eyes but words and lines increasing in saddened emotions until at the end it said the phrase wordless, just like in the title. This is very clever! I love it!
Jesse
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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cool! thank you jesse :-)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Your poem expresses writer's block extremely well. It's been many years (thank heavens) but I can identify with most of what this poet says, maybe not life without hope or a broken heart (but certainly frustration).
Good luck in the contest -- a marvelous presentation too, by the way. :)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Your poem expresses writer's block extremely well. It's been many years (thank heavens) but I can identify with most of what this poet says, maybe not life without hope or a broken heart (but certainly frustration).
Good luck in the contest -- a marvelous presentation too, by the way. :)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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thank you dawn :-)
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You are very welcome. :)
Comment from royowen
To get a shock, or be overcome with grief, or anything involving loss, which is a broad church, and I think you've written a special post to confirm, this is beautifully written, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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To get a shock, or be overcome with grief, or anything involving loss, which is a broad church, and I think you've written a special post to confirm, this is beautifully written, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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thank you roy :-)
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Most welcome
Comment from Mia Twysted
Sometimes that is how it goes, isn't it? When we are over come with grief it is hard to find the world that explain the pain we are feeling on the inside. This is depicted very well in this piece.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Sometimes that is how it goes, isn't it? When we are over come with grief it is hard to find the world that explain the pain we are feeling on the inside. This is depicted very well in this piece.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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yup! thank you mia :-)
Comment from Nina Sexton
Stunning presentation! Your words strike every chord with simple truths of our inner demons. I wish you luck in the contest and hope you enjoy your day.
If I may ask, how did you incorporate your poem into the animated image on fanstory? It was beautifully done!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Stunning presentation! Your words strike every chord with simple truths of our inner demons. I wish you luck in the contest and hope you enjoy your day.
If I may ask, how did you incorporate your poem into the animated image on fanstory? It was beautifully done!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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i search for pics on google images... upload them onto a picture saving site that gives url codes... and then paste it in... thank you nina :-)
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You're very welcome. Thanks for the tip!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Deep depression or grief leaves us feeling helpless and tearful and it is not a good state of mind to be in. You captured those sad moments here and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Deep depression or grief leaves us feeling helpless and tearful and it is not a good state of mind to be in. You captured those sad moments here and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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thank you dolly :-)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like your poem and image. The image does demonstrate what a person feels like when they have a tear-jerky day. It's easier to have a happy day instead of a sad day. When the sun is not shining, it is a sad day for sure.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Like your poem and image. The image does demonstrate what a person feels like when they have a tear-jerky day. It's easier to have a happy day instead of a sad day. When the sun is not shining, it is a sad day for sure.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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thank you rose :-)
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Whose Rose?
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oh i'm sorry. for some reason i just typed out half your name. i do apologise for that and thank you again for reading, rosemary
Comment from QC Poet
Unfortunately it's a sad feeling all writers have to suffer through until the next a muse ing thing comes our way. Sad but true nonetheless keep being inspired and let your pen flow. Blessings
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Unfortunately it's a sad feeling all writers have to suffer through until the next a muse ing thing comes our way. Sad but true nonetheless keep being inspired and let your pen flow. Blessings
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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LOL! thank you qc :-)
Comment from Jeano
You captured the emotions of heartbreak very well. You made it sound like a 12 step program for full blown desperation. Very well done. Good luck with the contest.
Write on!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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You captured the emotions of heartbreak very well. You made it sound like a 12 step program for full blown desperation. Very well done. Good luck with the contest.
Write on!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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LOL! thank you jean :-)