2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "~ My Yearning ~"*
13 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is quite romantic in both parts. The pictures and colorful type enhance the poetry. I always appreciate the lessons you give us on poetry. I am learning a lot.
I ho
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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This is quite romantic in both parts. The pictures and colorful type enhance the poetry. I always appreciate the lessons you give us on poetry. I am learning a lot.
I ho
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Karen :)
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:-)
Comment from June Sargent
This is a beautiful suite of tanka poems. The romance is sensuous without being overt. I can imagine these words being recited in a medieval court by a couple.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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This is a beautiful suite of tanka poems. The romance is sensuous without being overt. I can imagine these words being recited in a medieval court by a couple.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you, June :)
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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
This is a good couple tanka. By the font color, I assume the first one is from the woman and the second is the man's reply.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Hi MariVal,
This is a good couple tanka. By the font color, I assume the first one is from the woman and the second is the man's reply.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend
Joan
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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thank you very much, Joan, :)
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My pleasure, MaryVal.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is another absolutely beautiful poem and presentation. I enjoyed every letter in the poem. I could feel the yearning and the willingness to wait for this one love. BEAUTIFUL!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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This is another absolutely beautiful poem and presentation. I enjoyed every letter in the poem. I could feel the yearning and the willingness to wait for this one love. BEAUTIFUL!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I always appreciate your positive and kind reviews. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....full of flowery words that better captures the mood of the poem....so much more romantic than I would have written as a guy, "Let's Get It On!"
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....full of flowery words that better captures the mood of the poem....so much more romantic than I would have written as a guy, "Let's Get It On!"
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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LoL
Thank you very much, Mike. I always appreciate your positive and kind reviews. May you have a wonderful weekend.
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Comment from shelley kaye
wonderfully imagistic love letters - love the colours of light to dark
nice smooth flow of emotional words connecting lover to lover...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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wonderfully imagistic love letters - love the colours of light to dark
nice smooth flow of emotional words connecting lover to lover...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
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Comment from royowen
As always you always do a stellar job with this tanka form, and we are so fortunate that you are on this site to mentor, teach and to foster the "young" in Japanese poetry, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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As always you always do a stellar job with this tanka form, and we are so fortunate that you are on this site to mentor, teach and to foster the "young" in Japanese poetry, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Roy. I love poetry and teaching so I do what I can.
Thank you very much, Roy. I always appreciate your positive and kind reviews. May you have a wonderful weekend.
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
You always do such a great job with these love poems! I liked how you structured this as a couple poem and each one wrote to the other. It's the way God meant for love to be - reciprocal and strong.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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You always do such a great job with these love poems! I liked how you structured this as a couple poem and each one wrote to the other. It's the way God meant for love to be - reciprocal and strong.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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I need some of God's love.
I fixed and cleaned up my altar I bought a new Jesus Christ statute that lights up in different colors. I'll take a picture tomorrow. It's beautiful
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Marival
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Okay! Thank you!
Comment from Douglas Goff
The word yearning always lends itself to longing and missing. Almost loneliness. One of my favorites with so many mental images.
Another perfectly played color-scheme my friend. I do so enjoy you!
D.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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The word yearning always lends itself to longing and missing. Almost loneliness. One of my favorites with so many mental images.
Another perfectly played color-scheme my friend. I do so enjoy you!
D.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Douglas, you are always kind to me, I appreciate it.
Good night 😴
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
I like your couple tanka suite, with a his/her response.
They are so enraptured with one another they speak in one language.
Beautiful presentation too.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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I like your couple tanka suite, with a his/her response.
They are so enraptured with one another they speak in one language.
Beautiful presentation too.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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