Comment from Lea Tonin1

Exceptional

OMG that was a fantastic chapter wow there's no way I can figure out who did it I mean any one of them could have holy smokes you got some serious creep factor going on there I am suffering from the eeebeejeebees! Exceptionally well done from a wordsmith extraordinaire I see no issues with grammar sentence structure punctuation or subject matter it is quite a thriller horror mystery suspense all wrapped in one excellent work and a fine submission!

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Thank you very much your comments are greatly aprecated.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written, chapter for your book, and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I wish you the best with your book as well. I wish for you that you would have a happy day and a good week.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Thank you for your comments and support. It's is really appreciated

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Nicely written and the right amount the information and suspense. And now there might be a suspect after all. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Thank you. Your review adds to my desire to write more