Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from kahpot
Well, I have missed a few chapters, but totally relate to that talking in rhyme sequence, when I first started I found myself trying or just doing that, another excellent read, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Well, I have missed a few chapters, but totally relate to that talking in rhyme sequence, when I first started I found myself trying or just doing that, another excellent read, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thanks, kahpot.
Comment from judiverse
If any of these characters run, they'd better than the guys we have running for president now. Has Trump set a new standard for getting elected? These folks will be in good company, then. Pons is beginning to sound a little screwy in this, maybe because they've been drinking. Ned is beginning to make sense. At least he didn't declare he was running for president. I think Ned should propose to Betty. We'll see what happens there. Interesting script. It helps not to have so many characters. judi
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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If any of these characters run, they'd better than the guys we have running for president now. Has Trump set a new standard for getting elected? These folks will be in good company, then. Pons is beginning to sound a little screwy in this, maybe because they've been drinking. Ned is beginning to make sense. At least he didn't declare he was running for president. I think Ned should propose to Betty. We'll see what happens there. Interesting script. It helps not to have so many characters. judi
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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I will try to pull it together for the ongoing election.
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Those guys would have to be better than the actual candidates we have running now. I hope Ned and Betty get together. That would be fun. judi
Comment from nomi338
As confusion yet runs rampant, it appears there has been some sort of mass allusion where everyone wants to run for president and none seem interested in running for vice. Even so none would reject a little vice on the side.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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As confusion yet runs rampant, it appears there has been some sort of mass allusion where everyone wants to run for president and none seem interested in running for vice. Even so none would reject a little vice on the side.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Vice ain?t nice.
Comment from Baltimore Born
Very interesting script. Good continuous conversation between the characters. It looks like they all want to run for president. Your script reads well and looks to be very entertaining. Nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Very interesting script. Good continuous conversation between the characters. It looks like they all want to run for president. Your script reads well and looks to be very entertaining. Nice job.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you, BB
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You are welcome.
Comment from BethShelby
Well, it is good to see you make on this. Life many is leveling out for and you're anxious to know what your character and clones have been up? No good it seem since they are aabout to hauled away. If they presidently canadates don't make did they pledge to vote of Tump?
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Well, it is good to see you make on this. Life many is leveling out for and you're anxious to know what your character and clones have been up? No good it seem since they are aabout to hauled away. If they presidently canadates don't make did they pledge to vote of Tump?
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I hope that these people can get their act together in time to run for President.
Comment from lyenochka
At first I was thinking that didn't sound like Ned but then it became evident that everyone was quite drunk. Hope the marriage proposals will be said again when they are sober and mean it! Any of these guys should run for president!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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At first I was thinking that didn't sound like Ned but then it became evident that everyone was quite drunk. Hope the marriage proposals will be said again when they are sober and mean it! Any of these guys should run for president!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Helen