Driven
A free verse love poem33 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jessica,
This poem mixes love and lust well. It shows who good you two are together. The line breaks work well to enhance the emotion. It shows how
much love means to you if it is missed so much if it ends.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congratulations on placing second in the contest.
Have a nice day.
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hi Jessica,
This poem mixes love and lust well. It shows who good you two are together. The line breaks work well to enhance the emotion. It shows how
much love means to you if it is missed so much if it ends.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Congratulations on placing second in the contest.
Have a nice day.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Joan!!
That means a lot! Xo
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Don't mention it, Jessica.
JOan
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so beautiful. Your metaphor of love and a car work so well, it had me enthrawled. Love is hard to describe, but you've certainly put your stamp on with this one. It's fabulous, and I can only wish you the very best of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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That is so beautiful. Your metaphor of love and a car work so well, it had me enthrawled. Love is hard to describe, but you've certainly put your stamp on with this one. It's fabulous, and I can only wish you the very best of luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Sandra! Xoxo
Comment from Treischel
This passionate free verse poem is so steamy, yet done with the elegant teasing touch of a lover. You have sculpted the lines on the page with skill, creating a masterpiece of pace and pause that's breathless. Then you leave whthering. Bravo
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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This passionate free verse poem is so steamy, yet done with the elegant teasing touch of a lover. You have sculpted the lines on the page with skill, creating a masterpiece of pace and pause that's breathless. Then you leave whthering. Bravo
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you for this wonderful comment. I truly appreciate it! Xo
Comment from Sanku
It is a brilliant piece of free verse The feelings are deep and it has been conveyed effectively-a vessel stripped of motion - very strong feelings here ..All the best.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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It is a brilliant piece of free verse The feelings are deep and it has been conveyed effectively-a vessel stripped of motion - very strong feelings here ..All the best.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a powerful and moving poem about love and lust and all that entails. I can feel the love and lust in your words and am glad you found someone to share love with.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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a powerful and moving poem about love and lust and all that entails. I can feel the love and lust in your words and am glad you found someone to share love with.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Jake!
Comment from Julie Helms
Ah, Love, with a good dose of obsession running beneath it! This flows beautifully, and you managed to make mechanic metaphors sound very romantic!
This is my favorite stanza:
I am in love
with the way he loves me,
and the way
he draws love from me.
It's the stuff of dreams and fantasies.
Best of luck in the what is love poetry contest. You have a very good entry here.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Ah, Love, with a good dose of obsession running beneath it! This flows beautifully, and you managed to make mechanic metaphors sound very romantic!
This is my favorite stanza:
I am in love
with the way he loves me,
and the way
he draws love from me.
It's the stuff of dreams and fantasies.
Best of luck in the what is love poetry contest. You have a very good entry here.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Julie!
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is quite beautiful. Sounds like this fella must be a mechanic. Ha!
Great piece of work. Good luck in the What Is Love petty competition.
D
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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This is quite beautiful. Sounds like this fella must be a mechanic. Ha!
Great piece of work. Good luck in the What Is Love petty competition.
D
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Douglas!
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*poetry*.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Gorgeous photo. Your poetry is mesmerizing in it's fluid cadence. It flows with a will of it's own. Your words took me for the journey with you from start to finish. Great writing. Karen
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Gorgeous photo. Your poetry is mesmerizing in it's fluid cadence. It flows with a will of it's own. Your words took me for the journey with you from start to finish. Great writing. Karen
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Karen! That means the world. Xo
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you are welcome. I just posted myself. "The devil knows my Name." :-) Karen
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Thank you, Karen! Looking forward to reading you! Xo
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Thank you. Karen
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jessica the is certainly love with abandoned. I loved the metaphor of the vessel stripped of motion in his absence in the last stanza
..it just says it all. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Hi Jessica the is certainly love with abandoned. I loved the metaphor of the vessel stripped of motion in his absence in the last stanza
..it just says it all. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Ulla!! Xoxo
Comment from BenThrone
Now Jessica, is that a double entendre I see? Lol. This is a hot rod of a little poem. I might just have to go and park with it awhile. "I am in love with the way he loves me" is a beautiful turn of phrase.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Now Jessica, is that a double entendre I see? Lol. This is a hot rod of a little poem. I might just have to go and park with it awhile. "I am in love with the way he loves me" is a beautiful turn of phrase.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Haha! ;) Thank you so much, Ben! Xoxo